Some of the concerns for my paper are as followed:
1. I need to go into decription about why my the Uggs are so special compared to other boots besides the fact of the fur on the inside.
2. Be more descriptive of my certain pair of Uggs
3. Relate the boots more to society and how society can use these boots and see them as important as I do
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Lindsay, I think you did a pretty good job of fulfilling the assignment and it shows that you really like your boots and covered a lot of different topics when you talked about them. I can see why you love your boots too. I think you might have repeated yourself a little bit much about a few things, but that also helps your get your point across. I think you might need to focus your thesis a little bit better also. I got a lot from your paper but you should decide what you really want to say with it.
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